It’s the spookiest time of the year! I LOVE this time of year for writing competitions. Fall Frenzy kicked off the month of October and Susanna Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie finishes it off!
This year, Halloween will be very different in our house. We are celebrating with our quarantine bubble friends and having a candy scavenger hunt, piñatas and then finishing the night off with some Charlie Brown and the Great Pumpkin. My little man demanded that he be Bowser from the Nintendo family of characters and of course, I gave into the request. The head piece was purchased but the rest, I somehow figured out! And only a couple of glue gun burns!

So we are definitely more hyped up for Halloween this year than we would normally be!
BUT the MOST exciting thing is Susanna’s Halloweensie! This was SO fun last year and some how I managed to come up with a winning entry! I hope that you’ll all enjoy this entry too.
As you may know, the challenge is to come up with a Halloween story, not just a spooky story, it must be about Halloween, only use 100 words (or less) and include a variation of three words provided by Ms. Susanna Leonard Hill herself! This year the words are creep, skeleton and mask!
So without further a-boo!…
BEWITCHING BUBBLE BATH
By: Jocelyn Watkinson
Double, double, boil and bubble; brewing up a bath.
Exhausted from my creeping and my normal witchy wrath.
First, I’ll bask beneath a mask, composed from wing-of-bat.
Then strip down to my birthday suit and hang my pointy hat.
Some arsenic will do the trick to make a frothy tub,
to give my fleshy skeleton a soaking and a scrub.
Laid-back, relaxed, no longer taxed by trying to be frightful.
I’m too subdued to even “BOO!” This bathtub is…DING-DONG!
How dare those kids disrupt my bath demanding sugared grub…
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Oops! Forgot my bathrobe when I exited the tub!

EEK! I hope you enjoyed my naked witchy story – yikes – what a fright! 🙂
Thank you to Susanna Leonard Hill for a fun competition that everyone looks forward to each year, all the amazing donors and of course my fellow writers! I can’t wait to read all the spooky and goofy entries!!
Haha, love the ending. Funny and frightful!
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Tee hee! Thanks Brittany!
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Ha Ha! So fun and surprising. I got a good chuckle. Good luck!
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I love when the rhyme gets broken!
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It was my first time breaking it so I’m glad it was well received!
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This made me laugh, great job!! And what a cute Bowser, hope he has a fab Halloween!
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Thanks so much Ashley!! I’m so covered in glue gun burns but his smile makes it worth it!
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This is awesome. Good job and good luck!
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Thanks Lara!! I need to get over and read the other entries – did you enter??
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Oh so funny! Thanks for the giggle this morning. Love the story and the picture!
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Such fun!
Yours is the first entry I’ve read and if all the rest are as good, it is going to be very tough competition. 🎃
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Oh you just made me blush! Thank you so much!!
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You naughty naughty witch. Tee Hee. Loved it!
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So naughty! 😉 I was going to write it that she was going forget her bathrobe purposefully but that didn’t seem like a good age appropriate/potentially criminal behaviour. Yikes! 🙂
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Ha ha ha! I would love to have seen the children’s faces. Thanks for the laugh and good luck!
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Tee hee! Thanks Colleen! Might be the scariest thing they’ll ever see! haha!
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What a great one for Susanna’s Halloweensie! You are awesome!
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Is this MY Mom commenting??
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Too funny! And scary!
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Defintely something I’d shield my eyes from! 🙂
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Haha! Love the story and the ending. A different kind of scary! 🙂
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Right?? Probably scarred those kids for life! 🙂
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My daughter still says that about the time by 6’4″ tall brother cannonballed into the pool wearing one of her bathing suits when she was in middle school! LOL.
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OMG! That would be quite memorable! haha!!
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This is so much fun to read aloud. That ending made me really laugh out loud, too!
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Oooh! Thank you Sarah!! I’m glad it made your chuckle! My 6 year old thinks is super gross HAHA!
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Another fantastic entry, Jocelyn! You captured the exhausted witch’s mood perfectly and wrapped it up with a hilarious ending. Great job on your son’s costume as well! Happy Halloween and best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you Jill! You are soo sweet! Happy Halloween to you! And I’ll go check your entry – I’m assuming to entered as well??
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Haha! This is fantastic! Love the unexpected hilarious ending. Terrific storytelling!
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Thank you Kath! Glad the ending made you chuckle!!
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Such a cute story! Love the idea of a witch taking a bubble bath 🙂
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Such a funny ending! Good luck.
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Thanks Maria!!
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Hahaha! Love the ending! Good luck!
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Thanks Nancy!!
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Love how you set up the rhyme and then interrupt it. Good luck!
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Thanks so much Jilanne! It was my first time writing with an interruption and it was fun!
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Oh my! How embarassing, even for a witch!
Great story, Happy Halloweensie!
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Ha, ha, great entry! Loved the ending, and all the details leading up to it! Good luck!
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Thanks so much Katie!! 😛
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So funny! Good luck!
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Thanks so much!!
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What a great costume! It looks amazing; I’m a fan of ‘sewing’ that way, too! And your poem is hilarious.
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Oh thanks Chel! Unfortunately, it barely made it through the night! And thank you!!
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Hysterical!😆😆 Great story!
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TEE HEE! Thank you Diantha! 🙂
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This is one of my favorites. Too funny
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Ahh! Thank you Ginny!!
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Haha! So funny. Glad witch is getting a little me-time. Good luck with the contest!
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Self-care IS the best care! 😉
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